This is just getting amazing on this forum i have seen many poets/song writers but Liz i have to say you take the cake, tayla comes a close second but your like the top song writer on this forum

ohmigosh REALLY? wow thank you so much eeeeeeeee Thank You

Thank you Tay too

Hey I have wrote a story I hope it is ok I am very bored you see

"Wake up Harriet" shouted my mother from downstairs
"do I have to?" I groaned
I got up and went downstairs for breakfast, mother was reading her morning paper while drinking her daily cup of tea, she was dressed in her grey suite with her bob sticking out slightly. I wish I could sleep in, it was a cold morning and I really couldn't be bothered to walk to school
"mom, could you give me a lift to school I am too tired to walk" I asked
"No do you remember I am taking Luke to nursery you know that" she replied
"oh right yeah I remember my rotten little brother" she just looked at me. I ran up the stairs I needed to get ready for school, I put my green jumper dress on and my jeans, I needed to be warm. I brushed my hair, did the usuals and legged it out of the door, I couldn't bare to see my mother she looked very stressed I thought I would leave her to it,

I got to school, everyone was inside it was to cold to bare, I walked in an felt the warmth of the heaters warm my porcelain skin. I saw my friend Sophie waiting at our usually space she was my only friend I suppose I had plenty but she was the only one. Jealous of her, her blond hair looked gorgeous against her tanned skin an she ha a perfect nose unlike me.
"Hey Soph" I smiled
"Hey Harriet, hows you?" she asked with a smile
"Tired, cold, sniffly but nevertheless happy" I replied "you"
"Same old same old really. wow she looks creepy" she said pointing at this girl with pigtails, in a grey duffle coat, with a hello kitty bag.
"should we tell her we are in high school?" I asked
"Nah, but lets go ask her name" she rushed
"Hello, who are you?" Sophie asked in a strange robotic accent, I had to giggle at that
"I am Jennie, I am in the 9th grade" she replied
We walked away the burst out laughing
"She is wearing that and she is in year 10" I laughed
"and she thinks she is in America this is England" We laughed but I couldn't really my mother is American thats why she prefers to be called mom
"oh no is she staring at me?" I asked very self conscious
"oh yeah I think she is ha ha" she replied

Im gonna pause there Im having writers block

I like it, great makings of the beginning of an intersting story.
Little note though watch out for your punctuation on capital letters, full stops and question marks

Thanks you can tell how crap my english teacher is

new song lyrics


Lost between the unknown
I keep on walking
the path of the lost
it is so horrible I cannot see
who are you? are you from my past
Im lost help me find my life

chorus
do I see my past
before my eyes
do I crawl in lands of unknown
do I hear cries of death
all the death I have seen
lies in front me
but my death has already gone

I am in between heaven and hell
trying to find my way home
I search these paths but
Im going in circles
I'm lost
I cannot hide
away from my life
and my death
I'm dead

chorus
do I see my past
before my eyes
do I crawl in lands of unknown
do I hear cries of death
all the death I have seen
lies in front me
but my death has already gone

I cry at my feet
weeping hard as I deceive
I want to live but I can't
I am already dead
stuck between the unknown

chorus
do I see my past
before my eyes
do I crawl in lands of unknown
do I hear cries of death
all the death I have seen
lies in front me
but my death has already gone


Im walking in the unknown
I live no longer
I see death
I see my death
I see hell
don't make that happen

You're such a talented writer! Such beauty and emotion carved together

And your english teacher is crap

LOvely new lyrics Liz,you are getting better and better

Thank you guys although I had to keep editing it the last part kept going bonkers

Liz, stop getting better, it's getting harder to tell you how great your lyrics are

Really amazing song It's so deep and realyl beautifull. The story is interesting too, but as Tayla said you should watch your punctuation. Still, it's not that important, that's what editors are for xD It's the idea that matters.

Yeah haha Todd, thanks to you both

No Longer
I see the storm that rises again
the love I cherished has gone again
my misery my pain reunites again
why have I fallen again

I see your death
mine so far away
your going to die today
don't, my heart can cry no more tears for you
it cannot bleed for you

Chorus
I kill everyone I love
I can't bleed no longer
I don't have feelings no longer
I can't forgive no longer
I need strength to love again
You can't save me, no one can

I love you
but I can't for I see no future ahead
oh how I wished I did but no I can't
kill me if you want
but you have got to understand
I never die but you die everyday

Im so lost but no one can find me
I drown in my tears but I can't be saved
I live for ever longer but I die again
I can't die but I feel it
bleeding

Chorus
I kill everyone I love
I can't bleed no longer
I don't have feelings no longer
I can't forgive no longer
I need strength to love again
You can't save me, no one can

I live forever
but really who wants to live forever
its painful
its hell
I live everyday
but die every second

I love it. And it has a nice rhythm to it

You are a good writer. Nice lyrics. =)

Thank you

Night World
Did you ever hear the cries
of wolves behind the fog?
did you hear the mighty screams
of burning witches, being sacrificed?
did you here the screams of humans
as their blood is sucked?

Chorus
There are paths we walk, that others don’t
they aren’t human, they are humane
but dead inside
I cry at the thoughts of their death at my feet
it isn’t their fault, that they are beasts
it isn’t their fault they are dead.

We aren’t meant to know who they are
they live in their little world
where they hide
Night world
They can’t help it
but I love them

Chorus
There are paths we walk, that others don’t
they aren’t human, they are humane
but dead inside
I cry at the thoughts of their death at my feet
it isn’t their fault, that they are beasts
it isn’t their fault they are dead.

I want to know why they are
my life shall finally be overcome
they are my soul my life my love

Chorus
There are paths we walk, that others don’t
they aren’t human, they are humane
but dead inside
I cry at the thoughts of their death at my feet
it isn’t their fault, that they are beasts
it isn’t their fault they are dead.

It isn’t their fault x5

No its not

I want to to know their truth.

It sounds cool. Let me guess...Vampires and Witches ??

Vampires, Yay
Fanstasic Liz as always

yep vampires werewolves and witches inspired by a book I am ready at the moment thanks guys

Which book if I may know??

Night world by L J Smith I named the song after that he he

It's awsome Vampires, werewolves and witches are seriously cool.